Showing posts with label Wonderland. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Wonderland. Show all posts

Monday, April 23, 2012

Talon vs Thatcher


Recently, there has been a bit of a debate on who Tempest should have ended up with. The arguments on Lit were interesting: “Talon is like the husband away at war. By being with Thatcher she was betraying him! This is how it should be!” or “Talon and Tempest’s mating is like an arranged marriage.” (I am totally paraphrasing most of this, but I got the gist of the two sides, I’m sure.) It tickled me pink to see the debate and those torn between the two, and it feeds my soul to know that I caused it all. *insert evil cackle here*

So, let me admit something: I am totally one hundred percent Team Thatcher. He is flawed. He can be harsh, and odd, and just a little irritating at times. He lies, but everyone lies, and sometimes it’s hard to see what side he’s really on. He’s not tall, dark and handsome – he’s not even all that pretty. But he’s good and real and determined to do the right thing, even if people hate him for it. But let’s not cut Talon short, ‘kay? Talon has been asleep for over two-thousand years. He’s had no time to mature or develop. He’s been thrust into a completely foreign world than the one he grew up in. He’s the last of the Ancients, and his sworn enemy is taking over the world with little resistance. His allies fear him, and the only people he can depend upon are his human mate and Thatcher, a Raspan-Hybrid who just so happens to be the son of the Raspan hell-bent on decimating the human race.

Also, let me put it this way: if I had made Thatcher and Tempest a couple, the story would not have played out like it needed to. For awhile, I tried to write the story with Thatch and Temp as the romantic main couple, but things just fell apart. Talon became an unnecessary third wheel – and a broody, irritating one at that! – and the story wasn’t the same. But with Tempest and Talon a couple, it leaves Thatcher to go off and do the dirty, gritty things that at heart he truly loves doing – and besides, he’s got a war to end. He couldn’t save the world if he was rolling the furs with Tempest, hmm? ;)

Food for thought,
L.A.

Monday, March 5, 2012

Return to Wonderland.

So.

Wonderland Ch. 14 has made it to Lit.

While internally I am doing jumping jacks and cartwheels and dancing with myself like Billy Idol told me to, I am also kinda nauseated. (O.o)

I haven't written/posted anything for awhile, for many, many reasons that I'm pretty sure no one cares about,  so to have posted something after so long it's kind of like the very first time I ever submitted anything to Lit:
I'm so excited that I can't eat anything, I can't sleep, I'm freaking out that I thought posting was a good idea...in short, I'm something short of a mental breakdown.

Yea, it get's THAT serious.

Anyway, RELIEVE me of my torture by reading the chapter. Vote on it. Comment on the chapter's faults and it's highs. Tell me what you want more of via feedback. My neurotic brain will appreciate it.

Take the roundabout link tour here: links, glorious links!

XO,
L.A.

Thursday, March 1, 2012

NEWSNEWSNEWS!!!

Quick update:

I just submitted "Wonderland" Chapter 14: "And the Gargoyle wins." to Literotica!!!
Expect to see it live in a few days!
Thanks to kitten2010 for editing this chapter for me -- you are a godsend!!
You guys let me know what you think, okay?

XO,
L.A.

Monday, January 16, 2012

Wonderland Ch 14

I'm horrible, I know. Making all of you poor souls wait for months while I got my act together must've been a pain. So, naturally, I posted a teaser...over on the other blog. ;^)
Go HERE.
XO,
Lily

Sunday, December 25, 2011

Happy Holidays!

Greetings everyone! I know people are still out celebrating, pigging out on home-cooking and getting geared up for New Years Eve (I know I am at least!), so I'll keep this post short:

Saturday, December 3, 2011

Wonderland is up!!

Hey all, just wanted to drop by real quick to say that Wonderland Ch13 is up on Literotica.

The link is here: http://www.literotica.com/s/wonderland-ch-13

Credit to Mikothebaby (as always) for editing for me! Hope y'all enjoy the chapter! (The Coffee Shop is next!)

XO,
L.A.

Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Wonderland and Other Things...

Hey all! I know I've been seriously neglecting both my blog and Lit, and for that I'm sorry! Recent developments including a stubborn cold, my new job(!!!!), school work, and my Thanksgiving vacay to San Diego, CA took a toll on my writing time. I appreciate all of you who emailed me asking when the EFF I would get off my butt and start writing again because that really did help me put my head in a good place to get going. It's not that I have writer's block and I've just been putting things off, I've just been really busy!

As you may have seen on Twitter, I submitted "Wonderland - Chapter 13" to Literotica as of 10-15 minutes ago. Expect it to be up in 2-3 days, depending on how fast Lit works.

Also, I'm working hard on the latest TCS chapter. I'm rewriting the second half because I believe it is a bit too rushed. I had originally hoped to only post one or two more chapters and be done with it, but I may have to up the ante to 13, though this is all just my speculation and worry. I hope to have the chapter done by this weekend with a tentative posting date the week after. As always, I'll put the announcement on Twitter first, so check back to my Twitter profile often.

I hope everyone is doing well and enjoyed the holidays (if you don't celebrate Thanksgiving, then I hope you had a great weekend)!

XO,
L.A.

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Wonderland Ch13 Teaser


Wonderland Ch 13 teaser


"Wonderland Chapter Thirteen: Deals with Dragons Can Be Deadly"



Thursday, October 20, 2011

Just in...

I just posted a Halloween short story to Literotica as of...2 hrs ago, I think, for the Halloween contest this year. It was mostly for my enjoyment, and since it involved H-Ween, I thought it'd be fun to submit it.

Anyway, the story is called "The Modern Prometheus", (a title I totally stole from the talented Mary Shelley) and revolves around a demon named Elijah, a witch named Brie, and their quirky human friend Des, and answers the question of what happens when you steal a demon's fire.

Eeek!! I'm kinda excited about this one, it leaves a lot of open questions and it has a real twist at the end. It's not scary and doesn't really involve bad costumes or parties, but it's a Halloween story nonetheless. I hope y'all like it!!!

On another note, I posted the teasers for both upcoming chapters of TCS and WLand. They're up on their respective blogs, just follow the links at the top of my blogger page and click on the tab titled "Teasers" and there you go! Any comments to be had can be sent by email or Twitter, and those links are on my profile/blog as well.

Wishing everyone well,
Lily

Monday, October 10, 2011

Wonderland is live!!

Wonderland Ch 12 just posted to Lit this morning! In case you haven't checked it out yet, here's the link: http://t.co/666hHrHQ
WLand 13 is currently being edited (by me) and I'll send it out to my editor this weekend. TCS will be submitted to Lit by then as well, so keep your eyes peeled for Caleb & Peyton!
But for now, focus your attention on Tempest, Talon, and that pesky Fuyher. *Especially* Talon. That kid has a few tricks up his "sleeve" yet! ;-)
Remember, I love hearing feedback from you guys, just as much as I love the votes. Comments are great tools for a writer as well, so don't be stingy leaving me any of those!
As always you guys are great and thank you so much for reading me!!
Xo, Lily

Thursday, September 29, 2011

Wonderland Ch. 12 -- Teaser

As promised, the (unedited!) teaser to WLand Ch 12!! Sorry that's a bit short, but it sets the tone for the entire chapter, and it's the part I like the most. =)


Wonderland Chapter Twelve

Saturday, September 24, 2011

News!

Ok so I recently updated The Coffee Shop/Side Street blog page w/added character info, more music and more places around Hamish, including little bios along with.
In writing news, I will post the UNedited teaser for the next chapter of WLand in the coming days. Watch my Twitter for deets.
Hope you guys are well,
Lily

Tuesday, September 20, 2011

News and Things.

"Things" first, "news" later. =)
I'm not exactly a fluffy romance reader - in fact, I hate that stuff and won't read it even on the pain of death. My sister, bless her, loves all those romance/girly/feel-good books that have smut/rutting/what-have-you and you know what? THAT'S FINE.
But I don't read it.

Saturday, September 10, 2011

Newsnewsnews!!

Hey all!
Well, I finally got around to posting "Wonderland" Chapter Ten and "The Coffee Shop" Chapter Six!! They're up on Lit as we speak, so go check it out and vote vote vote! (As well as send feedback, I've been lacking in that department lately...)
Anyway, I just had another bit of news that I wanted to share that I thought you guys might be interested in: I've got the Wonderland website halfway up and running! I spent a loooong time putting it together, but it's still not completely finished (I got distracted by a phone call from an old friend and, well, you know how that goes...). I still need to add a few more pages to it, but hopefully it'll be completed in the next week or two. (Key word here being: "hopefully"...)
So, if you're curious, here's the little linkee and um...enjoy! =)
XO, Lily

Friday, August 5, 2011

Just to tease a bit further...

To be truly evil, I'm going to post a few snapshots of the upcoming chapters of Wonderland for your personal entertainment. =) Enjoy:

Wonderland Chapter 10 Teaser No. 2

I know, I know, I should have posted teaser #2 sooner, but I got sidetracked. Good news: I have chapters 11, 12, and 13 finished. I think a few more chapters and I'll have it wrapped up completely.
Anyway, without further ado, here is Teaser #2:
(BTW, if you missed Teaser #1, this is a continuation from where it left off, so go here: Teaser One so you won't be lost!)


WONDERLAND CHAPTER 10
TEASER #2

Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Wonderland Chapter 10 Teaser No. 1

Awhile ago I got Ch10 back from my editor and to be honest, I've been procrastinating about putting it up. Not because I haven't finished looking over the edits, but because I'm not sure if I like the way the story is going. I want to finish the story or at least have the next chapters written before I submit Ch10 to Literotica, to put it simply. So, until that happens, I'm posting a few paragraphs at a time from the chapter, starting at the beginning. Here's Teaser One of Chapter 10. Enjoy!
WONDERLAND CHAPTER TEN

Sunday, June 26, 2011

Wonderland Ch09 Teaser

This is a teaser from my as-of-yet unedited ninth chapter of "Wonderland". My editor's bday is today, so she's putting the editing on hold - understandably - to have a kickass celebration with her fam. So, I thought I'd go ahead and share a bit of the chapter with you. (Note: the teaser was taken from two scenes later in the chapter, so if you're confused with what's going on, that's why. Don't worry, a lot of action happens prior to this point of time.)
Let me know what y'all think. =) Enjoy!
Wonderland Ch09 Teaser

Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Wonderland Chapter Seven Teaser

Alright, so this weekend is Memorial Day weekend, and as I posted earlier somewhere, I'm going back home to Austin to see my family since I've been M.I.A. since Easter. As promised, I submitted WONDERLAND Chapter Seven to Lit today, since I'm not sure when Chapter Eight will go up. It's a bit of a doozie and it took a lot out of me to write. Hopefully it answers most of the questions everyone has - and brings up more. The next couple of chapters are going to be overwhelming for me, and already I wish I could just write a big "AND THEY ALL LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER", stick a fork in it and call it done. *sighs sadly* Obviously, I can't get my way, that'd be totally unfair to Tempest and the crew.
Anyway, before I leave, I wanted to post a teaser from Wonderland's Chapter Seven, because I enjoy messing with all of your minds. Without further ado...


WONDERLAND
Chapter Seven


Friday, May 20, 2011

Story Update

As I posted on Twitter, I submitted Wonderland's Chapter Six to Literotica yesterday. Already I can imagine what the comments will be, mainly because to many the chapter is going to look like filler. FYI: it's not.
I wrote this in the Author's Note of Chapter Six, but I'll write it here too: everything I write in those posted chapters of Wonderland mean something. I don't know how else to stress that.
I don't normally let things like petty comments or observations get to me, but when I have emails requesting that I rewrite the chapter because they hate the story line, or because they didn't take the time to read the chapter through and posted inane commentary about characters that don't make any freaking sense, I do get a little upset. While I won't go into too much detail, I will say this:

  • For Tempest's apparent "enjoyment" of her mind rape*, please read this line: "...she washed away her sweat, tears and humiliation..." Need I say more?
  • For the missing transition between chptrs 4 and 5: that was my own writer's blooper...and also slightly intentional. This, among other things, is explained in Chapter 6.
  • For those of you still confused on what the four species "really are" (this is in response to feedback I've received) click under the "Wonderland" link on this blog. As the chapters continue to post, I'll add more information. I don't want to give away secrets too early.
  • And finally, the next three chapters of this story (6, 7, 8 - particularly chapter 7) tell you basically everything you need to know. Chapter Eight is where the mayhem begins - truly - and by then, if everyone is still confused about the plot, characters, the world, what have you, I know then that I have failed as a writer.
Okay, so I've been on my soapbox long enough, but I just want anyone who is reading this to take away - if anything from this entire post - this: Every Inane Detail Means Something.
That is all,
LilyArc


* this is alluded to in Chapter Six via Thatcher's POV. It should explain things.